My First Little Poem Poem by Elias Uddin

My First Little Poem

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A starter perhaps,
or the last one
to begin with,
or the beginning of
a forested panorama
of fertile exuberance.

A drop of rain –
prematurely frozen
and estranged from
the flying masses,
fallen precipitously
on summer’s aridity,
failing to resuscitate
any unconscious dust,
deserted in desolation,
followed by none,
and hailed by none.

First words
from a baby’s mouth –
half-formed or fully obscure,
yet meaning a universe
yet to be deciphered
and lavishly extolled as such
through rhapsodic applauses
squeezed out of hearts,
awaiting imminent culmination
in a macrocosm of meaning –

or a stammering, discarded though,
going on and on,

or the first faltering steps
that have, ever since
they stepped on earth,
resulted in
a dynamic world of
life and deeds.

A vacillating shyness
shuddering
in fear of exposure
sending tremors
deep into the heart
and down the spines.

A new leaf
evoking dreams
of lush vegetation,

or an aspiring bud
peeping into
a flowery futurity.

A starter, perhaps,
declaring the end,
or an end in itself
triggering the start
to continue

Monday, March 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Zafar 17 March 2014

True feelings...........awesome!

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Chuy Amante 17 March 2014

WOW! The was a tommy gun followed by a shotgun blast! Love it! ! !

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Hans Vr 17 July 2014

`fantastic images. I am very convinced that this first drop has along the way grown in a majestic tree. This poem is so nice. Let a lush jungle of great poems follow. Excellent

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Valerie Dohren 07 July 2014

Great poem Elias - very inspired write.

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

Hail to all first poems. really nice Elias. well done my friend.

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Paul Butters 12 April 2014

Excellent poem Elias. Great oaks from acorns indeed.

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Susan Sparks 27 March 2014

Refreshing poem. Great imagery. Everything comes full circle. New beginnings eventually come around to the end and start all over again. Fantastic job!

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