Haikus In Pairs Poem by Elias Uddin

Haikus In Pairs

Rating: 5.0


Pair 01

1

I shouted, 'Help! Help! '
Nobody responded, for
I was in trouble.

2

I muttered, 'Help! Help! '
Everybody answered, for
Troubles were no more.

Pair 02

1

I shouted, 'Look! Look! '
Nobody looked at me, for
I was down on earth.

2

I just heaved a sigh;
All eyes got fixed on me, for
I was up the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Zafar 16 December 2013

Nice! Realistic! This Is a depiction of what happens in life.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 December 2013

Love it, all about life's ups and downs. I can relate to it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Muhammad Ali 23 December 2013

nice work brother. may we have courage to help each other.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 29 December 2013

very nice poem bro.....share all, thanks.......

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Maya Hanson 02 January 2014

i like it! ! ! Good job and thank you for your comment on darkest dimension ~mye3

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Dewan Sajol 16 December 2014

very nice and heart touching poem sir.@ proud to be your student.

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2014

a nice series of haikus well written enjoyed the read

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itss Raj 07 July 2014

its a awesome poetry....

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Motasim Billah 19 February 2014

realistic poems. liked them.

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Mohammad Zafar 10 February 2014

The first haiku in both the pairs has been true in my life and the second one has yet not been applicable.

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