Life Poem by Elias Uddin

Life

Rating: 4.9


Sitting on the chair,
The little baby fair
Tinkers with his hair,
Dreaming in morning's glare.

Walking in the garden
With trees fruit-laden,
Parents give a smile-
Lively and worthwhile.

Sitting on the bed,
Bending down his head,
Grandpa's lost in thought
Over battles fought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Ohee 16 December 2014

true child life story

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R.benjamin Abate 14 February 2014

Grandpa's lost in thought Over battles fought. Nice write.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 December 2013

Nice rhythm throughout poem, I like it. All about life in a short poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Mohammad Zafar 14 September 2013

Nice! I like the poem, because it reminds me of the reality of life and I visualise myself as an old man. Finally, we have to leave this world.

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Hans Vr 14 September 2013

Excellent poem; what a great start! Keep on writing, Elias

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