Winter Flees Poem by Elias Uddin

Winter Flees

Rating: 4.8


Buds and birds in glee,
Bees, and leaves tell spring to be;
Winter seems to flee.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Zafar 10 February 2014

Buds and birds in glee, Bees, and leaves tell spring to be; Winter seems to flee. I am happy that winter is fleeing.

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Elena Sandu 13 February 2014

Nice Haiku, thank you for share!

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Neela Nath Das 13 February 2014

Wow! A tiny typhoon stirring the stepping stone.Fab.

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Laughing@ You 30 March 2014

Very nice, Elias! Really enjoyed it.

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Susan Sparks 28 March 2014

You have reminded me that even in the season of dying off, a new beginning is right around the corner.

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Daniel Brick 28 March 2014

Although very brief and fleeting, your words capture the quality of this transitional season. I sense you are using your poetic voice the way ancient poets did - you want the gods and goddesses to preside over a beautiful season that will bless us with the joy of time, one not haunted by the fear of decay. A personal note: I don't trust my writing when I try to compose vignettes like yours which make their points quickly and then vanish. But I trust what I've read by you at your poetry site. Thanks much.

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Lyn Paul 15 February 2014

Written with bubbles of delight welcoming a warmer season. Thank you

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R.benjamin Abate 13 February 2014

Great haiku. Thanks.

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