My Dear Poets Don'T Bang Me Please! ...Sorry! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

My Dear Poets Don'T Bang Me Please! ...Sorry!

Rating: 4.9


With blunt of words, you slice the brick-kiln baked.
With crackers of humour, you light the fact.
With sprinkle of spices, you bring tears of rain.
With nuclear pen you fire words of neutron.
When I visit your page, you welcome me with warm words.
With jigsaw puzzle, you play scrabble.
You take us on a jumbo ride, but we find ourselves on boating ride.
You take us to mars, but we find ourselves on moon.
You tell us beautiful maiden is waiting for her love,
But find her missing love somewhere riding in stars to heaven.
Flowers you send to someone, surely it reaches but another one.
You say it's going to rain heavily, but I see summer shining bright.
You say you are going on holiday to May Fair, but I see your poem coming in July Fair.
You said tears did not fell, well it left me wondered where did it sublimate?
You say rainbow perfectly rests in your brow, I wondered when did they interchange their places.
You run behind roses, but garden is seen nowhere in desert.
You say tides rising in heart, left me wondered when did blood started rising like tides.
You try to fit yourself in other's shoe, and now you complain of shoe bite.
One lad went to meet his lass past Jan 2014, he is missing since then.
Yes, but I do love the critic...
I am just wondering if there was
No apple and serpentine what could the next alternative be?
With a stroke of words you turned yourself into beautiful eagle
It just left me wondered am I seeing magician.
You said Close your eyes! I closed my eyes, but didn't open yet my dear
As you never instructed me to open yet.
You said love your soul only and keep away from the body
I just wondered where should I keep.
At lunch you offered me pasta, but it reached me at dinner time.
You asked me to wait at window, but why did you climb all the stairs to tower, you could have used the lift instead.
Wind blew away the cotton candy which you gave, now only stick remained.
You said you are taking us to hanging garden.
You left us hanging and you went missing.
I couldn't take a single bite of red Kashmiri apple, as I saw my beloved's face in it.
Now I should never tell beautiful flow of words from your pen
But I should tell mobile flow of words from your laptop.
I could still feel the reflection of you in crystalline ball
though you are not standing in front of mirror.
You puzzled me with eleventh hour but on twelfth hour of midnight!
SORRY!

I think I am going to get a Big Bang from you all.
So I will just keep silence.
After thrashing is over, I will come out slowly.
Please do bang me after reading my notes....Sorry!



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR


Geetha Jayakumar.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note.
I appreciate all the poets from PH whole heartedly. Who brought such a vivid imagery and many more I couldn't up with...,
With the beautiful flow of words
Many words looked so real that I could visualise it. I appreciate your vast knowledge and usage of words.
I could learn so much things from you, I don't feel I am too far away from you. Really PH is a platform who brought us all together. This poem is not for making fun of anyone. If I have hurt you with my words, my apology.
Thank you for your many heartfelt comments which brought the real of me, motivated me, guided me for whatever I am today.
I remember everyone including some of them who are not active in PH.
Thank you all with my whole heart!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 19 July 2014

lovely write. thanks dear Geetha for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciar=te very much heather

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Babatunde Aremu 19 July 2014

Thank you so much for this wonderful poem. The contents are valid. I really appreciate your comments on my poems.

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I think I am going to get a Big Bang from you all. So I will just keep silence...... no need to be carried away....10 just ask no favor and earn the honor i find poem hunter refuge for all rounders Poem hunter too favor such tactic That is against spirit and basic New poets should be encouraged Daily ranking should be stopped or discouraged

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Salini Nair 20 July 2014

PH A real platform for all poets...its nice..when other sites compel to write comments, in PH its our heart that tells us to comment on creative writing....beautiful write

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Neela Nath Das 20 July 2014

Geetha, you are right.But, what happened friend?

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L Rao 23 July 2014

mam there's a new poem of mine VISION OF INDIA pls feel to read.. Regards Rao

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L Rao 23 July 2014

Hi Mam thanks for your comments in fact they were compliments for me, poetry is all about free flow of words, if not its not poetry at all. if words find hard to flow..thoughts would tend to escape as sir keats states if poetry should come it should come as leaves to plants...if not -not at all. Regards Rao

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 July 2014

I want to Thank each one of you with all my heart for the valuable comments. I do appreciate and respect your comments. Thanks a lot.....

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 July 2014

You have nicely put a poet's feelings. A poet gathers and arranges words with a certain idea in mind, while the reader may interpret it entirely differently. Once the poem takes its shape it is left to the readers to interpret the collection of words. Let every interpretation be positive. Thank you for a beautiful poem. I also thank you for all your kind words about several of my poems.

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Savita Tyagi 21 July 2014

Very interesting poem Geeta written with great imagination. I am trying to go behind these words but knowing one's mind is a daunting task and so is expressing what goes on in one's mind. Accepting my limitations I will just say that enjoyed this write. Haven't done cross word puzzle for a long time! Thank you so much for your appreciative comment on my poem.

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