My Dear Brother! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

My Dear Brother!

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Train moved on
It halted on the station
May be to offload the
Burden of sorrow
Which I was
Carrying since long.
Co-passengers were
Very kind enough
Helped me off load
The extra luggage.
My eyes were searching
For you,
And was happy
To see you smiling and happy as usual
You were waving hand.
You will be always there
In my prayers
And
From my heart
I wish you a long
And happy life.
You will be always
Remembered,
For all the encouragement
And the support
You gave me
In all success of my endeavours
Forgive me for any words of hurt from me.
Thanks a lot for everything dear.
I will never come your way
To your village
Chill......
Just kidding.

Train went on,
Journey moving with
New passengers.
Looked out of window
Cool breeze flowing
While I could feel the
aroma of favourite tea
With some flavour of spices.
Yes, I do need to fill
My life with spices
To keep it
glowing like before.

May God Bless
You Dear Brother!
And your Beautiful Village!

On occasion of Raksha Bandhan Day, I dedicate this to you dear Brother.
Brother is not just the word, It means a lot to me like the word.
And I seek your valuable blessings on this auspicious day.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Monday, August 19, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: brother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem I dedicated to M.D.Dinesh Nair....He is and will always remain like Brother to me...I dont have any brothers, but I wrote this thinking of him..Sorry for delay in posting.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

a lovely dedication to your dear brother.

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Subbaraman N V 19 August 2013

Thanks for your greetings on the happy occasion. A great train journey, well presented. Congratulations. N V Sbbaramani

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 August 2013

Nice dedication to dear brother on this auspicious day.

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Kanav Justa 10 December 2013

a wonderful poem for a wonderful person, , ,

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Dinesan Madathil 28 August 2013

Thank you dear sister Geetha... I have four own sisters who have ever made my life lighter ever and ever and now a few more like you are seemingly standing by and making me feel like a flying feather..... Keep on travelling and one day you may see your brother waving from the platform.

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Vijay Sai R 21 August 2013

what a way to give tribute to such a nice brother

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Shahzia Batool 20 August 2013

a heartfelt poem written so sincerely for your brother! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

Nice dedication to dear brother on this auspicious day. relation of brother n sister is unique that God made. it covers so many relation together. a great write.

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