My Answer To Diane Hine ….. [see Her Poem Mankind's Survival ….Or Not; Perhaps Tongue-In-Cheek; Fairly Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

My Answer To Diane Hine ….. [see Her Poem Mankind's Survival ….Or Not; Perhaps Tongue-In-Cheek; Fairly Short]



[not b or c or d. a in part. but also e]


e) Forced by desperation and doubt,
the weathered survivors cast about,
and no longer saved the lives of those..
too old or feeble to reach their own …….
…..toes.

Those who could not or would not work,
though young, were eaten, ….feet to tongue.
Medicines to save dying babes, and the old, and …
cancer and ‘bad-heart' patients, etc., was sold ….
to those who could pay the steadily rising prices.
No longer would it be doled out to the ‘poorer', in slices …
…of government handouts.

Another 'tool' was mandated family planning, to control population,
increasing or decreasing, as varied from nation to nation.
No more vacation flights, as most planes were grounded.
Few conveniences and longer work hours, as before 'civilizations' were founded.

To bed with sundown and up to toil at dawn,
no more pink flamingos on manicured lawns.
The survivors would make or not make a new Dawn of Mankind.

(March 12,2016)

Saturday, March 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: future,survival
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
see add-on to title.bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 15 June 2023

In March 2016, Eugene Levich sent this comment: 'Eugene Levich13 March 2016Yow! What a great response to Diane Hine's absurdly wonderful poem! ' : ) bri

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2016

'Medicines to save dying babes, and the old, and … cancer and ‘bad-heart' patients, etc., was sold …. to those who could pay the steadily rising prices. No longer would it be doled out to the ‘poorer', in slices … …of government handouts.' no a time came when tax paid government handouts went to business campaign supporters and into back pocket politician bribes reminding of an old saying here Not all politicians are bad, it is just the other 99% who give them a bad name'.

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Kelly Kurt 13 March 2016

~~Woe is us. A fun read.

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