Melodious Feeling Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Melodious Feeling

Rating: 5.0


I wonder at times
What would I be
Without you
By my side.

Maybe just a wanderer
Of some sort
Searching and searching
Not knowing what.

I would stand
An empty vessel
Making noise
No one likes to listen.

You came into my life
Providing me
The direction
That I needed.

You filled
The emptiness
With love
It's so melodious.

Saturday, January 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

A delightful poem...loved the lucidity of poetic expression. Top score.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

Beautiful flow of words..... You filled The emptiness With love It's so melodious. A lovely tribute to your loved one. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 25 January 2015

A loving tribute to someone you adore! i guess it is none other than your partner in life! Loved reading it!

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