Matches Poem by Lucienne Kim Flavell

Matches

Rating: 5.0


Silence stretches between us,
his hands and eyes locked
under the table
texting his mates.

The waiter lights a candle,
pushes it between us.
The wax melts
then congeals like blood.

He snaps his mobile shut.
Looking at my chest he says,
'I've got to go, it's late.'
I watch his coat march out.

Chips cool on his plate.
My skin burns.
On our first date
the bill remains unpaid.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Matches was voted 22nd out of over 1,400 poems in the Poetic Republic Poetry Prize 2012 and has been published in Poetic Republic: Poems to Talk About on Amazon.co.uk.

Matches was long-listed for the Virginia Warbey Poetry Prize 2011.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tajudeen Shah 09 January 2013

i think i started off reading your verses from here. would love to explore if at all new sharp posts up. God bless. rgds taj shah

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Luscious Larry 31 December 2012

I loved it. (I wasn't laughing though like some of the others) A bit sad really.

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Paul Brookes 29 December 2012

So funny still laughing...........................Thanks for sharing

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Kanav Justa 21 December 2012

hahahha, , , , , you are good, , , , , nice humor, , ,

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Bri Edwards 11 December 2012

Lucienne, i am privileged to be the first to comment on this. i laughed OUT LOUD at the line about him talking to your chest. sorry. i guess i'm insensitive to the situation. i then had to explain to my wife that it was NOT one of my poems that made me laugh. please send the meal bill to me and i will gladly pay it. if i were not single i would take you to dinner. bri edwards...... and i WOULD pay.

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