Limerick- (Serious) Tips For Happy Living! Poem by Valsa George

You have written good advice So I had to read it twice Lofty thoughts they shy from me For I'm simple as can be And my friends they are so nice Thanks Valsa

Thanks a lot Loke...! . Love reading your response, always! I have been trying to give some insight That would help our lives become bright Glad you read it twice And felt they are nice However, please don't see it as advice!

Sorry, due to some technical issues I am not able to vote! I will vote it later

not bad, my friend, but i'd use If, not On at start of last line. of course, it is 'just my idea'. to MyPoemList bri :) p.s. i think people have a harder time bouncing back than a rubber ball has! but being a person may be more interesting than being a ball.

it's a nightmare. i couldn't leave an old fool/buffoon hanging alone and i'm the only one i could find. when i post a comment, you get an email. then, read the comment. that is demanding a lot of charity from someone so special. not to waste your valuable time with a trivial, self-serving comment...i'll forward both our concerns to poemhunter...you keep writing!

A great Limerick with a valuable message for all. Liked it as a change in style and liked its lovely rimes.

A clever write in its simplicity. Amazing advice for a joyful life. Well executed piece.10

Great advice in lines so simple. It will be a joy to follow this and feel happy.

Wise thoughts with wise decisions. The path to happiness is the decisions we make.