Keep Living 7 Poem by Jahan Zeb

Keep Living 7

Rating: 5.0


Sunlight dimmed, no sign of the king yet
The dark drew, in chest of the queen, a cut
Doubts in her heart, lost hope of his return
The warmth of his arms, but she had to earn
Tears from her eyes poured like rain
Thoughts of her king, gave in heart pain
With wet eyes, watched the setting sun
Her soul from her body started to run
Great was the gloom in the heart of the queen
Hope in the heart made all the doubts clean
To search her king she took the same route
Bare hands she went, wearing one boot
Ran she fast, very fast to a forest
Traveled she miles without taking rest
In the distant woods when she disappeared
Kings of her dreams from east appeared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

I am imagining the look on their tired faces! Reunited at last! X x yay

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Valsa George 03 January 2013

Now he will gallantly walk up to his princess and after an emotional tight embrace with tears of joy running down from each others eyes, rescue her from the island, go back and live together happy evermore, never to part again! ! Though sounds like a fairy tale, the way you have stringed together the incidents and presented them are remarkable and enjoyable! ! A great narrative! !

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Sallam Yassin 02 January 2013

is the king adam in a great way u told the story of mankind her adam rose like the sun from east/top one Jahan god bless u

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Sallam Yassin 02 January 2013

is the king adam in a great way u told the story of mankind her adam rose like the sun from east/top one Jahan god bless u

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2013

True love never runs smooth, with so many obstacles put in their path! Great story! !

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Malakand Pakistan
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