Keep Living 8 (Last Part) Poem by Jahan Zeb

Keep Living 8 (Last Part)

Rating: 5.0


Searched he, in rooms and garden sweet
Restlessly he ran, the queen, he had to meet
To every place he went, found no sign
Wished and prayed she might be all fine
Alone was he in the castle of his dreams
Looked all around but found no gleams
Sat on a rock, face wrapped in palms
Imagined his queen on one of the malms
Saw suddenly signs in the white sand
Followed footmarks made on strand
Queen searching king, reached a forest thick
Thirsty, hungry, tired, feeling very sick
Heard a voice calling, from far behind
Smiles and tears in her heart combined
Ran to her king fast with open arms
To arms, of her comforts and her calms
Queen and handsome king, wept and cried
Later they both smiled, tears dried
To the world of people they would go
They would play in or run in snow
Out came the moon, with her smiles
Showed them the castle, far off miles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

That was epic! A romantic series of poems with a happy ending! Just so sweet! X x I can tell you enjoyed composing it! X x and we enjoyed reading it!

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Hazel Durham 06 January 2013

A truly romantic and beautiful ending written from the heart! Your ''Keep Living'' poems are full of optimism, love and true grit in a sometimes hostile world!

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Payal Parande 05 January 2013

oh! how amazing...i am speechless sir...beautiful story from start to end....you get 101 out of 100 bravo.................

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2013

This poem had differently among all Keep living poems...well this is the last part, after this we still must keep living right hahahahaha....the poem written with very well like always but tell me a deep about the real story behind it...to my mail_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 05 January 2013

Followed footmarks. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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