Jindagi Ka Aakaar Poem by ramesh rai
Jindagi Ka Aakaar
Jindagi ka koyee jyamitik aakkar ho
ise main nahi manata
jis kon se dekho
uska aakar badal jata hai
kabhi to wah lagati hai ek bindu
jismein ahang ki sthiti matra dikhti hai
kabhi wah ban jati hai ek virat vrit
jiski paridhi se saari srishti
pariveshthit ho jati hai
kabhi lagati hai ek rekha si
jiski lambai badhati jati hai
aur hum aadi bindu se door bhaag jate hain
kabhi wah dikhati hai
ek tribhuj ki aakar si
jiske shirsh par baitha niyanta
apani do lambi bhujaon se
ham sab ko thame rakhata hai
kabhi wah ban jati hai ek chaturbhuj
jisme aakarshan aur vikarshan
sthiti aur laye ki
samanantar rekhayen paraspar katati rahati hai
aur kabhi aisa lagata hai
jindagi ka n koi aakar hai
n koyee roop hai bas bakwas hai
jo charo ore se ghira hai.
Zindagi ka koi aakar nahin....Very true said. Aapki kavita pyaari hain. I loved reading it.
Wonderful poem sir, life is something which is difficult to describe, yet you have described it so well and I do agree with the suggestion of savita ji,10/10
Sach hi kaha, Jindagi ka koi roop nahi. Enjoyed the whole poem accept the word Bakwas. Just doesn't seem to fit in otherwise lovely poem. I hope you do not mind my saying this but some other word will enhance the poem.
Plan, elevation and the third view are the technical drawings for the engineers. For an artist or for a poet the isometric view is better, but that too cannot present the complete view of the life.
aur kabhi aisa lagata hai jindagi ka n koi aakar hai n koyee roop hai Life is a shapeless form and a formless shape. Kya baat hai. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 11:44:33 PM # 1.0.0.1119
beautiful comparison of life..........................great sir