It Was The Day Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Was The Day

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It was the day when you first kissed
I always desired and honestly missed
It was your breath that made me to think
Was I prepared to swim with you and sink?

It was not less than paradise
Where we had pledged to some promises
Your hand around me took to extreme edge
I just went behind it with young age

It was just magnificent touch
I never felt in life as such
It was you alone that made me like bird
Just forced me to look at you and follow afterward

It makes me to burn with desire
How I make it live and admire?
It is your delicate and gentle whisper
I just go into magic spell and murmur

Oh I can't believe it is you
You wanted me to continue
Even though it might have looked not true
I must be prepared to pass it through

I never thought of it to happen
It had done well and passed on smoothly even
This time it made me to fall for and go after
Some times it makes me to burst into laughter

I have no where to look at
You are permanently placed in my heart
It is god’s blessing that you have entered
In life to excel and as readily offered

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Alexis KrysynaLess than a minute ago confusing at first, read 3 times. grammar, context and rhythm needs a little work. concept appealing and good ideas. Comment +1 caring

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o touching... Brenda Peterson5 minutes ago great poem of love, feeling, and desire Comment +1 good (yet)

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caring Erik Medel3 minutes ago good to your heart

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It was the day when you first kissed I always desired and honestly missed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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