Members Who Read Most Number Of Poems

Live Scores

Click here to see the rest of the list

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

For Example: love, art, fashion, friendship and etc.

It was the day

It was the day when you first kissed
I always desired and honestly missed
It was your breath that made me to think
Was I prepared to swim with you and sink?

It was not less than paradise
Where we had pledged to some promises
Your hand around me took to extreme edge
I just went behind it with young age

It was just magnificent touch
I never felt in life as such
It was you alone that made me like bird
Just forced me to look at you and follow afterward

It makes me to burn with desire
How I make it live and admire?
It is your delicate and gentle whisper
I just go into magic spell and murmur

Oh I can't believe it is you
You wanted me to continue
Even though it might have looked not true
I must be prepared to pass it through

I never thought of it to happen
It had done well and passed on smoothly even
This time it made me to fall for and go after
Some times it makes me to burst into laughter

I have no where to look at
You are permanently placed in my heart
It is god’s blessing that you have entered
In life to excel and as readily offered

Submitted: Saturday, May 18, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (A more and more by hasmukh amathalal )

Enter the verification code :

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2013 11:34:00 PM)

    Alexis KrysynaLess than a minute ago confusing at first, read 3 times. grammar, context and rhythm needs a little work. concept appealing and good ideas. Comment +1 caring

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2013 11:34:00 PM)

    o touching... Brenda Peterson5 minutes ago great poem of love, feeling, and desire Comment +1 good (yet)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    caring Erik Medel3 minutes ago good to your heart

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2013 11:10:00 PM)

    It was the day when you first kissed
    I always desired and honestly missed

Read all 4 comments »
[Hata Bildir]