^ Indebted Poem by Adeline Foster
^ Indebted
^Indebted
When I was poor
And always sure
Of whom my friends
And creditors were
I'd hasten fleet
The debt to meet
Lest any think me
A deadbeat.
Now I am rich,
The fact of which
Those self-same friends
And creditors itch.
My creditors cry
But have not I
A favor done them
When I buy?
They need not fear
The funds are here
And they'll be paid
Sometime this year.
Rich in rhythm and rhyme and also refreshing and rewarding to read.
Many can relate to this write of yours, Adeline.It is so true.And I love your rhyme and rhythm.A nice piece.
Very relevant in the times we live in! ! Great use of rhyme. 10 ++++
Thank you for the suggestion, I did enjoy this. Did you read others of mine? I welcome your comments.
adeline, i had to laugh at the ending. MY creditors get theirs on time..... unless i forget; i must not be rich. i enjoyed the rhyme scheme. thanks for sharing. bri
Hahaha! That's great. It's very concise, funny, and wise.
Really like it, I've had them knocking at the door in the past, I gave them the same answer, some time this year. A great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Oh I just loved this one - I so can relate.