In Orbit Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Orbit



In orbit

Expectation
Spoils relation
It is called mother of an evil
Never die but remain still

Man is social animal
And wants to be good individual
But faces hurdle
And forces him to struggle

So it gives rise to greed
Where he needs
More comfort
And luxurious sort

So he will try to borrow
And then not allow
Its smooth return
This shall turn into ugly situation

He shall lose good will
People may not trust his skill
And avoid his presence
So he loses good will chance

It is better
To remain in order
Be calm and restrict
Your wishes in orbit

In Orbit
Tuesday, February 7, 2017
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 February 2017

welcome tarun h mehta Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2017

Susan E Birch Lalon, although its reported that Shakespeare once said 'I always feel happy' The quote above is not Shakespeare, its not in Shakespearean English and cannot be attributed to him. It is obviously a very modern quote. However, I applaud the sentiments: D Unlike · Reply · 1 · 59 mins · Edited

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2017

Lalon Bin Mahmud Each & Every single Letters That Accumulate Your Words In Order Radiate As Sparkling Sands Of A Sandy Beach By The Ocean Of Knowledge! ! ! Unlike · Reply · 1 · 5 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2017

welcoem lalon bin mahmud Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2017

It is better To remain in order Be calm and restrict Your wishes in orbit

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