In My Time Poem by Laurie hill

In My Time

Rating: 5.0


I know that if i walked this earth,
a thousand years or more,
I'd never feel this strange rebirth
Thats felt in your rapport ,
To touch the stars, I hold you close
to feel your breath with mine
And hold you in the afterglow
Forever, , , ,
....... in my time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 16 May 2009

Wonderful gentle write Laurie...10++

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Viola Grey 16 May 2009

and those few lines are all it takes to light a fire in the soul...wonderful write Laurie...loved it.

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Sonya Florentino 17 May 2009

oh wow Laurie, if this is a new poem, you're getting better & better!

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Ann Beard 17 May 2009

Beautiful as usual Laurie. a gem of a poem with a huge heart. Kind regards Ann

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Saadat Tahir 21 May 2009

Laurie hi very nice lines there a sparkle you did there cheers

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Smiley Hooker 22 August 2009

She's so lucky...this is very sweet and beautiful! thanks for sharing my friend :)

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Sally Carter 05 July 2009

All I'd really like to say is 'exquisite', but the computer demands more than 20 words.

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T S 27 May 2009

So beautiful,10 ++++

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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2009

hey hold it there...cheese fantastic laurie its beautiful cheers

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Simply romantic and beautiful. 'and hold you in the afterglow forever.......in my time! sigh! 10 Karin Anderson

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