After You'D Gone Poem by Laurie hill
After You'D Gone
After you'd gone,
I watched until the darkness hid you.
Pressing my cheek gently, softly,
against the cool window pane.
Frost, like an angels brooch, melted slowly upon the glass
as did my memories, unclear,
of days long past.
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Hauntingly beautiful, I love the line 'frost like an angel's brooch' Well versed 10 Lynda xx
This is really beautiful Laurie. well chosen words, exquisite imagery. Thank you for sharing.
This is incredibly touching! I can picture the scene and the emotions flowing in my heart and mind. Short, with great impact! I so love this, thanks! :)
You set the stage amazingly in the first stanza and the second one is a work of art all by itself!
Exquisite Laurie, pure perfection these lines that touch the heart. Thank you. Cindy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 11:06:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Something I can relate to.... well writen.