If There Was No You Poem by Abdul Wahab

If There Was No You

Rating: 5.0


You were
So today

Like ocean
I have tide

In my drowsy mind
And dry heart

and sing a song
In broken tune

of beauty and love
you were there

So today
I paint

laugh and wonder
and a captain

i become of a ship capsized
as there was dream

if there was no promise
then, today,

how could I twitch
an ear in hope

to listen that again
if there was no’ you ‘

where could I get
a portrait to hang upon

to see twice
before I go to sleep?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

Heart felt poem my friend, explosive write man. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 06 July 2013

excellent write. One of my favorites. love it

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Sallam Yassin 06 July 2013

that's the art when what in silent lines really talk / great piece from great heart well done

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Tribhawan Kaul 06 July 2013

Beautiful composition. Of late you have adopted a style totally different from your earlier poem. It is nice. I am enjoying it.

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

xtreme beautiful compose. liked so much

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