If I Knew Someone Cared Poem by Nicole Rawls

If I Knew Someone Cared

Rating: 4.6


If I knew someone cared.
If I knew someone loved.
I would be able to
Handle without
Messing up.

If I was pretty.
If I was kind.
I would no longer be
The girl
People want to leave
Behind.

If they didn’t expect
So much out
Of me.
If only the would
Like me for who
I am.
I don’t think
I would no
Longer give a damn.

I care about
Your thought,
I care how you feel.

Why can’t
I allow my
Pain to heal?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liliana ~el 25 October 2013

Deep wounds; pressure

1 0 Reply

deep down we all want to feel wanted and needed, as someone once said to me a heart in pain is a heart that will love again, take care, nice poem :)

1 0 Reply
Muriel Emerson 27 May 2009

i love you and care with all my heart i miss you like crazy and i too haven't been doing too hot.........write to me asap and tell kassie too i love you both please dont do anything stupid i can't lose another friend

0 0 Reply
Dakotah French 07 July 2009

I care about you and always will because ur amazing in ur own way and i love it and im actully im looking at you in class rite now and ur sooo cue ooking at that civics book

0 0 Reply
Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 October 2014

Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? one who care about other can't allow his own wound to heal'' He knows the enjoyment of pain nice one

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 25 October 2014

I care about Your thought, I care how you feel. Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? A picture of selfless true love.

0 0 Reply
Lenny Camacho 25 October 2014

allow it Nicole... let it heal by writing more precious words that stick together in poetry

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... Why can’t I allow my Pain to heal? That's the beautiful thoughts you have expressed well. If we can allow pain to heal by ourselves then this shows one is courageous enough to handle all pains. I loved the way you presented. Thanks for sharing with us. Congrats for this poem being the poem of the day! ! !

1 0 Reply
Leslie Philibert 25 October 2014

Like this. I would though put thought in the plural, and the main verb in the second verse in the conjunctive, were pretty, were kind. A good poem!

1 0 Reply
Lyn Paul 25 October 2014

Great Poem of the day Nicole and by these words I can tell that you have a huge heart. Thank you

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success