I Want To Write Poem by Asif Baloch

I Want To Write

Rating: 4.8


I want to write on something
Extreme
Make you to hear my painful
Screams
Screams of my heart and
Tormented soul
Screams of those yearnings which
Never yearned

I want to write on feeling I
Gained
Make you to feel my inner
Pain
Pain of loneliness and
Shattered dreams
Pain of the lost love which
Never ought

I want to write on my dying
Heart
Make you to weep just single
Tear drop
Tear for the rhymes I wrote
With blood
Tear of sympathy of not
Being loved

I want to write on death
Instead
Make you to smile and toast
Thou raised
Toast for the death of another
Useless being
Toast for the broken heart with
Hushed screams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 04 November 2008

This poem seems to have done it well

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

pain and sorrow all too evident..............well penned

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

Tear for the rhymes I wrote With blood Love those lines. good job. Becca

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Ben Gieske 26 November 2008

This poem certainly expresses a lot of feelings and passion. Reminds me of the painting, The Scream.

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Gargi Saha 05 November 2008

A very hear breaking mournful poem.

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Seema Chowdhury 04 November 2008

another sad poem asif.... why? ? ? come out of this whirlwind of pain.face this life and get a hold of yourself. ride your life, don't let it ride you.... you can do it. try try again.

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