I Am Still Me Poem by Asif Baloch

Few days ago I sent a message to Mamta Agarwal on how a poets gets into the shoes of another person/object and writes a poem feeling the feelings of that other person or object. This is a perfect example of such great writing....Almost like the conceplt of my new poem HOT KILN, I wrote inspired by the behavier of my friend.Very well expressed, clean, lucid and powerfulll..........10++++++

you said it right, Aijaz...many here won't admit...

welcome to poemhunter. i liked your selection of topic and you did justice to your poem. well done and hope we'll see more poems in the coming days. good luck! !

great poem....thanks for sharing.

I am impressed with your insight of humanity. Greed and power can corrupt us all as we struggle to survive in a world that sees and respects only power. Well done

wow! ! I really like this goes to my fav list +10 a lil similar to my ARE U THERE regards anjali (Report)

fix yourself and don't be confused..you're still you...

'I kill myself every day every night With brutality I don’t know when that day will come When I will become we Cause till now I am still me' A very nice idea is here. Lovely.

wow that was really deep, so true, reallty good emotions i love them.. i was truly speechless, keep writing~ Hazel G.E

good poem..enjoyed................