One Moment Poem by Asif Baloch

Well done, the images help reinvorce the feelings of this poem.

I really like what you have written, Maybe there is not a moment that defines us, but a life time of experiences. Do we wait on it or do we seek it? Questions, questions? ...very nice poem....10

this is a very powerful poem... good job. I enjoyed reading it very much. I’m still waiting for it to come My fate is slow and time is on the run great lines.. great poem...ummm yep I think I will add it to my favs. Becca

a very deep in meaning a good write of an experienced hand....only u can create such magic.

Beautifully worded saga of pain and desperation.........10

So deep. Thanks for sharing.

That's a great use of figurative speech.. Great painting of how one feels when he is waiting in despair.. Nice..

lost in despair, waiting for that moment which would change the course of life- you have skillfully built the mood by imagery amd metaphors. emotionally charged poem - universal longing.10 Mamta

May be my death is near = maybe instead of may be. maybe is a one word. a passionate one

Quite emotional but still i love itcoz it feels me nice. BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! best wishes maryam