I Wail With Silent Cry Poem by Asif Baloch

I Wail With Silent Cry

Rating: 4.7


I was born as a useless being
Sent in the myth of painful scene
Chain of venomous thorns put on me
Each moment when it ties
I wail with a silent cry

I write with trembling hands
I try but could not stand
I weep with no tears left to shed
Soul is haunted by lonely thoughts
I wail with a silent cry

My eyes open wide but still in dreams
My lips are sealed but I hear painful screams
My heart, alas my poor heart
Sings a sad song of love to be
Standing alone and no one by my side
I wail with a silent cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 October 2008

Sometimes silence is golden they say.

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Marria Attar 14 October 2008

Very nice poem...very painful and touching

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Seema Chowdhury 14 October 2008

An excellent work of your Aijaz. the words comes from your heart and touches others heart. there is a sequence of hurts and pains that can be felt while reading them. pl don't be so sad and don't feel like that.

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Anjali Sinha 14 October 2008

no u r not useless you r great! ! ! ! dont wail that silent cry we are with you. regards anjali +10 (read mine ALL I SEE IS YOU)

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Evaughn Gray 14 October 2008

that's so sad but i really loved it... it was just a beautiful piece that you've written here.. i love the imagery that i saw while reading this poem it was amazing ~Love Hazel

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Standing alone and no one by my side- a moment made invincible and timeless

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Dr Kamran Haider 22 October 2008

Beautiful portryal of painful moemnts and tormented emotions... A great piece indeed... Keep it up Asif... Regards, Kamran

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

A amusing poem that touches heart. Especially, the last four lines are wonderful. Love it.10 added.

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A wonderful poem. U get 10++

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Joe Breunig 17 October 2008

An enjoyable piece; I will e-mail you some private suggestions on how to possibly increase the strength of this poem. -Joe

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