I'Ve Been Addicted To You Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

I'Ve Been Addicted To You

Rating: 5.0


By the sugariness of your milk
By the womanliness of your silk

By the fragrance of red rose
By the affection butterfly shows

By the lullabies of cool breeze
By the swaying of tall trees

By the glory of sunrise
BY the sorrow of goodbyes

Now I know one thing is true
I've been addicted wholly to you

(2009/2/22)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 22 February 2009

Beautifully phrased. And such a lovely addiction. Your sentiments are vivid and expressive. Well done! Linda

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Viola Grey 22 February 2009

the only kind of addiction I could ever understand....nicely said

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Ency Bearis 23 February 2009

She might be hypnotized you so you addicted to her..but a good addiction..not to substance abuse...nice write...10

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There is such a lilting flow to this poem of yours. Just a simply divine piece of love! Karin Anderson

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 23 February 2009

Its romantic and definately sweet. You'll win over someones heart with this. It makes me feel so warm inside. Good write.

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Anthony Foster 07 March 2009

How natural events and things can remind of a good woman. When in love everything is in primary colours.

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Well, like all the women I really like this poem! It flows, it rhymes and it is speaking so delightfully to a woman. Karin Anderson

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 February 2009

Wow! Terrific. The kind of style in poetry I always adore. Please try my poem MY QUESTIONS. You may like it.

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Linda Winchell 24 February 2009

Ah, the fragrant words of a man in love. Great peice you must well know by now. God Bless, Linda Peace to you and your great nation.

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Emma7 J 24 February 2009

interesting, i like it, good peom

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