jenie hart


I Quit - Poem by jenie hart

love for me
you had that love

love me with that love
always

i am dying to get that love
and a lovely love

never hide that love
from me

my life is what your love
my love too small

remember me friends
I Quit


Poet's Notes about The Poem

my last wish
i want 50 comments on this poem
help me anyways

Comments about I Quit by jenie hart

  • Gold Star - 8,667 Points Bri Edwards (8/19/2013 12:29:00 AM)

    jenie, ok, there, i've left two comments already. yes, they are quite similar. if you quit, what will you do next? ?
    waiting for the answer. bri :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,667 Points Bri Edwards (8/19/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    jenie, let US have progress reports, girl.
    i follow the whole poem EXCEPT the lines:

    my life is what your love
    my love too small.....................is that what you meant to write. send me a message please. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,667 Points Bri Edwards (8/19/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    jenie, let US have progress reports, girl.
    i follow the whole poem EXCEPT the lines:

    my life is what your love
    my love too small.....................is that what you meant to write. send me a message please. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,888 Points Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    never give up Jenie. love is just around the corner (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,888 Points Heather Wilkins (7/24/2013 11:05:00 AM)

    a new love is always just around the corner. never gie up on it good write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,095 Points Patricia Grantham (7/22/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    Don't give up on love girl. Keep on stepping over the
    stones. Quitting is a means of escape. Keep going!
    Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,453 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/22/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Nice words of love, but what happened at the end? Why quit? Quit from where? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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