I'M Always Rich Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I'M Always Rich

Rating: 5.0


I eat only once in a noon
Sleeps empty watching moon
With dreams of silver spoon
Slips into sound sleep soon
In my life its only boon

I wear only one pair
With a tatty dry hair
Even on day of fair
But I have a tiny lair
In my life it’s only fair

One day I get paid
Other day I get laid
With no one to aid
I do work has maid
My life is full of raid

I have only one link
That will never get sink
Even without any wink
Can write it in bold ink
In my life it’s only pink

I don’t need any witch
To on my life switch
God is my hearts pitch
So even if he ditch
I will be always rich

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 11 May 2009

very good poem! ! ! ! i really like your flow and the way you use words! ! !

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lovely use of rhymes.. to give a nice meaning.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 May 2009

A wonderful poem, Kranthi. Bitter reality, wisdom, irony, thoughts, flow and rhyme you have altogether blended in this poem........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2009

To remain rich in heart always...i liked the good theme inside this write...nice rhyming effort, Kranthi...10

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Catrina Heart 12 May 2009

It is better to be rich in our heart and soul than have the richness of this earthly things which we couldn't bring to the other world............fabulous end rhymes....10

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Joseph Poewhit 22 May 2009

Wealth is only a burden in life to carry.

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Louis Rams 13 May 2009

beautiful poem on suffering and faith.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 May 2009

Blessed are the poor for they shall be comforted............ A Good Write..........

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 May 2009

A poor man is richer than the rich. The kind of happiness one gets from contentment is not equalled by any amount of money and luxery.(Please read my poem What a feeling)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

Lovely meaningful verse with nice ending. Love with 10.

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