Longing Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

I know this feeling sir! ! ... 'In hours of longing Lips were drying Drums were dying Hope was crying Heart kept breaking' and i feel you'v written this one with so much emotion.. Simple but very free flowing write.... Moving one... I honestly don't know wehter longing is a good thing or a bad thing.. But we long for so many things aren't we? ..... nice write. with loves shan

nice portrait, well written poem.......10

you built a cresendo and...last but not the least....but the best In hours of longing Salt was my eating Sweet was my dreaming My dreams kept falling My longing is undying well written cheers

We all have longings in life. Though they are only temporal.

Longing is the recourse of life! sweet 'ing' chorous! 10+

longing a beautiful write and longing for her is great..............

An everlasting longing emerging from the rhyme and rhythm of love.......10.

I totallly loved the flow of this poem...10s

a genuine heart speak of the truth....all have experienced what emotion affect our soul...it did struck my heart....a poem that touches each soul to survive... a very unforgivable feeling of distress of one own life to stand in the limbo of death and life......thank you for sharing this poem, God bless.....a 10 +++

longing is a feeling that endures.here it is amusing too. 'In hours of longing Salt was my eating Sweet was my dreaming My dreams kept falling My longing is undying ' well written voted10 surya