In My Loneliness Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

In My Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


This crying sky shares pain with me
And this dancing tree shares its joy
That tall mountain shares its wealth
And playing ocean shares its breath
And this flying birds, share their time

Fallen leafs, share their color with me
And withered flower shares its smile
Rotten fruit shares its hope with me
And deserted dry tree shares its shade
And blowing breeze, shares its folds

Far rising sun, shares its day with me
And beautiful moon shares its night
Glowing star shares its dream with me
And that shooting star shares its wish
And the cloud, shares its name with me

World of mine shares its meal with me
And that world of his shares its light
This quill of mine shares heart with me
And this sheet of white shares its life
And my loneliness shares, peace with me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…Rotten fruit shares its hope with me…’ This is the most beauteous spot where I’m glued…indeed fantastic…genius …gestate… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 April 2010

This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 April 2010

This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.

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Eyan Desir 07 April 2010

Good write But sometimes it's better to be alone there are rotten ppl out there... thank u

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Joseph Poewhit 07 April 2010

Takes all types to make a world, alone is only one state of being. Though with GOD your never alone.

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Sheldon Saluta 13 April 2010

i like your poem! it seems we're in lined with one milieu... LONELINESS this poem has a comparison to my poem life in isolation maybe, i could relate to your vehements!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 April 2010

thanks for sharing.... poetic

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Marieta Maglas 08 April 2010

wonderful poem, it is practically an indestructible connection between the human being and the nature...lovely to read 10/10

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The Lost.. 08 April 2010

wonderful one, i really liked it: D loneliness is the hardest feeling ever, i was sufering this feling before, but thanks God i dont feel loneliness now as i used too. sometimes we feel lonelimess even if we have a big family hope u happy life. thanks.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 April 2010

You are with so many things and how come loneliness is present. Solitude might be a more proper word. The poem is a bit abstract and takes time to comprehend.

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