Closed Path Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Closed Path

Rating: 5.0


Path of my voyage
Closed in front of eyes
By waving a farewell
To all my provisions
I had wished for life

In cover of its obscurity
I cried on limited power
Inside my silent shelter
Which time laid for me
To discover my new lay

Then I had found
There lays no end
For a true heart
That beats in love
Even when it breaks

So my old words died
On tip of my tongue
And new melodies came
From deep inside heart
I sang my new lays

When my old tracks
Had gone with wind
New land had opened
For me to wonder
In its hidden rich beauty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 June 2009

Closed paths are apparent though in static situations of life with one finding him or herself directionless. Yet the trance is what that can make the otherwise aimless life of a human being to glow if one follows the circle of pragmatism. Best Wishes Naseer

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Eyan Desir 20 June 2009

Complex good flow Well crafted Kranthi

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 June 2009

When one path is close other path is opened......a good write.......

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Louis Rams 21 June 2009

doors open when we're down and out, thats what love is all about.

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Surya . 22 June 2009

very good decesion.knock the door, it will open. nice poem.keep it up port. voted10 surya

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

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Ted M 02 July 2009

You have described Life well in a few sentences. Things change; You never how things can change, change for the better only if look for it. Well published.

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a very good attitude in this poem...go forth for the beauty

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

hello friend! ! ! ' When my old tracks Had gone with wind New land had opened For me to wonder In its hidden rich beauty ' so glad to hear you talking like this friend! ! ! ! ! .....nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ... i wish i can think like this..i m all negative and pessimistic! ! 10++ well deserved.. with love shan

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