ramesh rai

Gold Star - 12,835 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

I Have To Cross The Great Ocean - Poem by ramesh rai

I have to cross the great ocean
with my little boat
which has thousand holes
please tell my friend
how to cross the great ocean

The waves of the ocean are too high
than that of height of mount Everest
thousand Tsunamis are yet to come
please tell my friend
how to cross the great ocean

The little boat gifted to me by my Lord
I do not find another boat
due to my carelessness there is thousand holes
no mechanics can repair it
but i have to cross the great ocean

please tell my friend
how to cross the great ocean


Comments about I Have To Cross The Great Ocean by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Savita Tyagi (9/29/2014 7:43:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. With God by its side even a boat with thousand holes crosses ocean in triumph. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (4/7/2012 9:37:00 AM)

    The small boat gifted to me by the lord...my carelessness it has thousand holes...BUT I HAVE TO CROSS THE GREAT OCEAN. Lovely poem friend and so encouraging. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (4/7/2012 9:36:00 AM)

    The small boat gifted to me by the lord...my carelessness it has thousand holes...BUT I HAVE TO CROSS THE GREAT OCEAN. Lovely poem friend and so encouraging. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,449 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (2/17/2012 10:26:00 PM)

    Dear.Ramesh rai, It is a good poem. How to cross the great ocean? is a good question, Either take some time before you sail to plug the holes or better swim.
    V.K.Kanniappan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Herant X.. (2/15/2012 6:12:00 PM)

    A beautiful way of expressing life threw words.

    Great poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Renu Kakkar (2/13/2012 1:42:00 AM)

    ocean being time with turbulances and the boat being life....the holes in the boat being our follies..intention to cross the ocean i.e your belief on doing right.....great inspirational and spiritually inclined poem..really enjoyed..full marks (though i am no one to give marks) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Vipins Puthooran (2/8/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    [to reach your shore, row your life- boat with the oar of belief]
    wonderful poem/top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 821 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (2/7/2012 2:38:00 AM)

    Magic! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 403 Points Rekha Mandagere (2/4/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful imagery is used to depict one's life. Great respect and love for life is smiling all around which takes the boat safely on ocean! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Meilani Rozavian (2/3/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    Beatifully written.
    Thanks for your comment.
    Blessed be (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points Umaprosad Das (2/3/2012 9:55:00 PM)

    To reach one's destination, there may be so many barriers,
    Not enough resources, not a suitable carrier.
    But one must put the best effort to overcome the hindrance,
    Along with the full confidence and firm determination
    And finally he or she may be crowned with the success.
    With my appreciation for the piece and best wishes. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, February 3, 2012


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