I Have A Bird Inside My Belly Poem by Vishal Sharma

I Have A Bird Inside My Belly



I can spit words and form a poem
and not to worry of its consequence
as it always brings a good luck for me
and i am quit sure you all are experiencing this
a fine poetry is called unwritten soul and spirit leaf
and my poems are always loyal to them forever
and i know they are better than me by far
and i also know i never think of consequencs
i always write words, they become poetry by itself
and its not my mistake, i do it daily
as i am ordered to do so by the bird in my belly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 19 June 2013

perhaps your bird can say hello to my mouse: #10 in my list of poems: A Mouse In My Stomach.....[LONG; Human Body; Animals] 11/30/2012 the author, vishal, has requested that i read some of his work and comment on it. i would be glad to and have picked this one first because its title reminded me of my poem #10(at the moment) AND because i 'love' birds. chicken and turkey are nice in my stomach, but mostly i just like to see and hear alive wild birds. well my poem is perhaps less serious than I HAVE A BIRD INSIDE MY BELLY. i do like this poem. the message is unique and well-expressed. i guess if you are just following orders of the bird, you cannot be blamed for any poem and the bird should have to deal with any consequences. i like that you included a tribute to two of your poet friends. thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 14 June 2013

Thanks for this write, but you shouldnt say that Vishal, you are getting better and better by days...i never started any writing, when i was 17 and poetry? haha no...just imagined you do great ones now, and just few years your talent getting bigger than ever...you have a bird inside your belly, so the bird may share you the wings and ability to take you high anytime sooner! ..do writing Vishal and you are heading to great journey as a writer, i know that...i proud to u now and will proud of you someday...this is your potential..dont give up on your dream..fight for it_Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 June 2013

the title of this poem has the beak and that is in the belly. Vishal Kumar. Good Luck to you as you wanted it.

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