Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

I have a bird inside my belly


I can spit words and form a poem
and not to worry of its consequence
as it always brings a good luck for me
and i am quit sure you all are experiencing this
a fine poetry is called unwritten soul and spirit leaf
and my poems are always loyal to them forever
and i know they are better than me by far
and i also know i never think of consequencs
i always write words, they become poetry by itself
and its not my mistake, i do it daily
as i am ordered to do so by the bird in my belly.

Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 14, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,737 Points Bri Edwards (6/19/2013 8:06:00 PM)

    perhaps your bird can say hello to my mouse:
    #10 in my list of poems: A Mouse In My Stomach.....[LONG; Human Body; Animals] 11/30/2012

    the author, vishal, has requested that i read some of his work and comment on it. i would be glad to and have picked this one first because its title reminded me of my poem #10(at the moment) AND because i 'love' birds. chicken and turkey are nice in my stomach, but mostly i just like to see and hear alive wild birds. well my poem is perhaps less serious than I HAVE A BIRD INSIDE MY BELLY.
    i do like this poem. the message is unique and well-expressed. i guess if you are just following orders of the bird, you cannot be blamed for any poem and the bird should have to deal with any consequences. i like that you included a tribute to two of your poet friends. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 934 Points Unwritten Soul (6/14/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Thanks for this write, but you shouldnt say that Vishal, you are getting better and better by days...i never started any writing, when i was 17 and poetry? haha no...just imagined you do great ones now, and just few years your talent getting bigger than ever...you have a bird inside your belly, so the bird may share you the wings and ability to take you high anytime sooner! ..do writing Vishal and you are heading to great journey as a writer, i know that...i proud to u now and will proud of you someday...this is your potential..dont give up on your dream..fight for it_Soul (Report) Reply

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