Vishal Sharma

Veteran Poet - 1,016 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

I Have A Bird Inside My Belly - Poem by Vishal Sharma

I can spit words and form a poem
and not to worry of its consequence
as it always brings a good luck for me
and i am quit sure you all are experiencing this
a fine poetry is called unwritten soul and spirit leaf
and my poems are always loyal to them forever
and i know they are better than me by far
and i also know i never think of consequencs
i always write words, they become poetry by itself
and its not my mistake, i do it daily
as i am ordered to do so by the bird in my belly.

Comments about I Have A Bird Inside My Belly by Vishal Sharma

  • Gold Star - 13,724 Points Bri Edwards (6/19/2013 8:06:00 PM)

    perhaps your bird can say hello to my mouse:
    #10 in my list of poems: A Mouse In My Stomach.....[LONG; Human Body; Animals] 11/30/2012

    the author, vishal, has requested that i read some of his work and comment on it. i would be glad to and have picked this one first because its title reminded me of my poem #10(at the moment) AND because i 'love' birds. chicken and turkey are nice in my stomach, but mostly i just like to see and hear alive wild birds. well my poem is perhaps less serious than I HAVE A BIRD INSIDE MY BELLY.
    i do like this poem. the message is unique and well-expressed. i guess if you are just following orders of the bird, you cannot be blamed for any poem and the bird should have to deal with any consequences. i like that you included a tribute to two of your poet friends. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,667 Points Unwritten Soul (6/14/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    Thanks for this write, but you shouldnt say that Vishal, you are getting better and better by days...i never started any writing, when i was 17 and poetry? haha no...just imagined you do great ones now, and just few years your talent getting bigger than have a bird inside your belly, so the bird may share you the wings and ability to take you high anytime sooner! writing Vishal and you are heading to great journey as a writer, i know that...i proud to u now and will proud of you someday...this is your potential..dont give up on your dream..fight for it_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,058 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/14/2013 12:59:00 AM)

    the title of this poem has the beak and that is in the belly. Vishal Kumar. Good Luck to you as you wanted it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 14, 2013

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