I For Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I For

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I for

"I" stands for alone
With arrogance and lone
Selfish creature
And always worried about future

The feeling of an "I"
Catches eye
And comes under observation
It raises doubts and questions

When person says "I"
I am only one who can try
And conquer whole world
And bring under fold

It is I only could do
And prove true
Else might have failed
But I have scaled

It is good if told "We"
Here everybody feels free
We share jointly
And put the front bravely

It may be sign or identification
But leads to suffocation
Where you are termed as an arrogant
And termed as person with no grant of wisdom

Friday, September 16, 2016
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 16 September 2016

This is a very well-thought poem: sharp, objective, and with great eloquence. The characteristics of a narcissist are brought to light in a perfect poetic image.

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2016

I stands for alone With arrogance and lone Selfish creature And always worried about future - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - It is good if told We Here everybody feels free We share jointly And put the front bravely - - - - - - - - - - - - Thanks for sharing this poem of wisdom.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2016

It may be sign or identification But leads to suffocation Where you are termed as an arrogant And termed as person with no grant of wisdom

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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