I Doubt Poem by Aftab Alam

I Doubt

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Every one willin' to be rich,
Why can't we try to be rich internally?
Ah! Poverty stricken mentally,

Beautifying, cleaning only face and dress,
The dirty ruffian; I ‘m ashamed with self grace,
Ah! Why can't we clean?
Heart and mind and tongue and eyes..
I am upset my loves, my guys,

Slowly love flew out from the nest,
And Lust entered into the nest—
Humanity! The best at rest for test,
Are we really a human or ghost?
I doubt…I doubt…..

Sunday, October 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 12 October 2014

If only we would spend more time on what we say and do, the world would be such a nicer place with not so many broken hearts! Beautiful write! Thank you for your lovely comment and congrats on my poem ''The Essence Is You''

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2014

Slowly love flew out from the nest, And Lust entered into the nest— Humanity! The best at rest for test, Are we really a human or ghost? I doubt…I doubt…..10

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Sallam Yassin 12 October 2014

shining faces shiny on clothes where in dirty hearts swiming the tongues your doubts brightly true of heart/ bro

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Amitava Sur 12 October 2014

The doubt is not very unjustified in the context of today's social turbulent condition.87475 In my language Humanity is at stake You may read my poem in the same name.

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