I Am So, So Sorry! ! ! ! ….. [ A Collaborative Effort By Jr. Cuyam's "Breaking You" And Bri's Words; I Added 'love' And 'sorry'; Serious; Not Too Long] Poem by Bri Edwards
I Am So, So Sorry! ! ! ! ….. [ A Collaborative Effort By Jr. Cuyam's "Breaking You" And Bri's Words; I Added 'love' And 'sorry'; Serious; Not Too Long]
***I am so sorry that i hurt you with my words.
They should have been sweet; they were turds.
I am sorry we are 'broken up' now, it is true.
***I hope this apology brings me back to you!
This and a promise, which I hope I can keep:
I'll use no hurtful words, OR I'll not say a peep!
***I'm now SORRY! I was so careless and VERY stupid.
I'm desperate, so desperate I've consulted with Cupid.
***The words were unintentional heedless thoughts I threw.
Please tell me now: 'How can I make it all up to You? '
***I am SO sorry! Deep inside I know you're still bleeding.
Please give me another chance. To you now I am pleading.
I love you still. I miss you at all times. Say we can go back...
to where we were. If I misbehave again, just give me a crack!
***A crack on my stupid and at times thoughtless head.
Being without you feels horrible; I almost feel dead.
I am sorry. I'm am so Sorry. I AM SO SORRY my Love.
Come back to me and, once again, I'll believe in angels above.
XOX
Yours (I hope) ,
Jr. Cuyam
(August 5th, 2017)
Jr. Cuyam asked me for help in winning his girlfriend back by having me give him advice on his poem Breaking You. First I told him his poem was more like a lecture than an apology. Then I wrote my poem in my second comment on his poem.
HIS poem NEVER mentions "love" or "sorry"! ! ! I used some of the words of his poem (but not MANY of them) and my words to suggest a more winning approach to her heart. MY mate always insists on an apology ……even when I feel none is called for! ! ! Eventually I usually do apologize to her. : (
Even if she is not sure I am being sincere, my "apologies" seem to soothe her. Ha ha! :) :)
Bri …………the experienced apologizer!
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*** these lines contain at least one significant word from the original poem written by Jr. Cuyam.
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for 'peep', use the 2nd definition:
'Definition of peep
intransitive verb
1
: to utter a feeble shrill sound as of a bird newly hatched: cheep
2
: to utter the slightest sound
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 4:17:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Good advice. nice way to say sorry. I hope he will get help with it. nice work.