Ali Sabry

Rookie - 77 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

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Hurtful interaction

hearing last word from you was hello
my heart were betting fast was about to blow

my hopeless entertaining never brought me a smile into my face
I admit my failure in that race

new life with different taste dragged me
shameful manner for the rest of life hosts me

stand front of the ocean wave and saying goodbye
all heard from me was true and i never lie

listen to your heart and see the reality
compare me and see the quality

hope you like it.

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,657 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/10/2014 2:12:00 PM)

    Beautiful heart-touching poem, straight from your heart, it comes through with
    all the feelings you have inside. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,657 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/10/2014 2:11:00 PM)

    Beautiful heart-touching poem, straight from your heart, it comes through with
    all the feelings you have inside. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Jessica Dehn (1/29/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    very beautiful and touching you can clearly hear your woes when reading it! Good Job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 891 Points Drkgbalakrishnan Kandangath (1/7/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Nice Ali.The words are from your heart. Breezing.
    Really touching young friend!
    I shall read you more.
    You are welcome to comment on my poems and books.
    Love.
    dr.k.g.balakrishnan kandangath (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Clifton Redmond (11/8/2013 4:49:00 AM)

    Hello, I like the concept here, however it is apparent that English does not come naturally to you. My
    honest advice is to download a dictionary that can help you translate a bit better. Your poems are fairly good so it's a shame that these minor mistakes are present. I hope you all the best in the future.

    Regards, Clifton Redmond. (Report) Reply

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