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Hailie Workman
(12/26/2008 8:17:00 PM) |
this is a really good poem. i enjoyed it a lot. but i noticed that in your poems you tend to use a lot of puntuation. its kinda distracting, maybe you should tone it down a bit
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Joshua Eremia
(12/4/2008 6:26:00 PM) |
you remind me of John Clare.
you have your own style and own way of...punctuating it and spelling.
obviously you don't care to follow many of the rules, which necessarily, isn't a bad thing. Unique.
Keep up the poetry works.: ]
everyone appreciates a good literary work.
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palas kumar ray
(9/23/2008 1:52:00 AM) |
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Hope your heart will never die under any adversity.
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
(9/6/2008 5:06:00 PM) |
Hope is always there.Pandora left in her box.There is a silver lining in every cloud and love conquors all bad things.Best wishes
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paul shannon
(8/2/2008 7:19:00 PM) |
you pour the emo lotion on your fingers, then lightly brush them over the keys and the keys begin to sing........
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Paulina Vacas
(7/24/2008 4:23:00 AM) |
actually it works better as a song
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Dylan Gipp
(7/13/2008 7:12:00 PM) |
Ok, well i dont really follow the poem.... But all in all its not to bad..
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in the darkest hour
(6/6/2008 11:10:00 AM) |
good! ! ! don't let that hope leave. stay strong...im still praying for you.
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Kay Hollister
(5/30/2008 2:36:00 PM) |
not the best i have ever seen but not the worst either
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