If my life is a big horrible lie....................
If my little bird will never get to fly..............
If the smoky clouds have never left the sky......
If my grade had never been high...............
If my only lover said Goodbye.........
If he refused to give us a chance to try..........
If I could never overcome the fact of being so shy...........
If all poor countries would never have any food supply...........
and every one kept asking......
why? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
each of us has become a dangerous big Spy.............
If I have always been so emotional
and any thing would easly make me cry.......
all what I can say..............
with a deep sigh.......and a tearful eye......................
Hope in my heart will never die................
A beautiful heartfelt poem. Holds a lot of truth. I like it. -Kylie M. Lynch
bravo! *claps for emo girl* that was beautiful! i liked it! ima give it a 10!
WOW! ! ! ! It's awesome! You're wonderful! Don't worry abour being shy. Everyone has fears inside. Thanks, Sofia.
wow, thats really awesome. and really dont worry about being shy, your great and thats what counts.: D dav.
this is a really good poem. i enjoyed it a lot. but i noticed that in your poems you tend to use a lot of puntuation. its kinda distracting, maybe you should tone it down a bit
you remind me of John Clare. you have your own style and own way of...punctuating it and spelling. obviously you don't care to follow many of the rules, which necessarily, isn't a bad thing. Unique. Keep up the poetry works.: ] everyone appreciates a good literary work.
Hope is always there.Pandora left in her box.There is a silver lining in every cloud and love conquors all bad things.Best wishes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
actually it works better as a song