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Jade Mcnaughton
(8/11/2009 10:28:00 AM) |
i think this is a good poem youve expressed well how we can all feel sometimes
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Is It poetry
(7/12/2009 9:12:00 PM) |
lolz..you keep reading
she keeps sitting alone..
laughing..while you wash
her feet in the rain.. :)
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Ellen Saunders
(4/20/2009 8:12:00 AM) |
I'm trying ever so hard NOT to be discouraging right now... But i really didn't enjoy this at all. The fact that this is even in the top 500 list (let alone being in the 100s) is really quite depressing, more so than the poem is intended to make us feel. I'm not trying to be hurtful at all - please keep that in mind. Just step outside the borders of these hackneyed types of poems and do something original! Everyone feels like this sometimes, and if this is how you like to express these feelings, keep doing it! However, please do readers a favour and let your style evolve into something more than mediocre, teenage angsty-type writing. At least to justify that 170 position!
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Kevin Gamba
(2/24/2009 8:19:00 AM) |
what the? ? ? ?
172-alone by emo girl
200 -Sonnet 43 - How do I love thee? Let me count the ways
what the? ? ? ?
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A. Winter
(1/30/2009 12:12:00 PM) |
Umm... huh? Who let this get on the top 500 poems list? Discuss.
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Tony B.
(12/8/2008 2:31:00 PM) |
i think its sad that is poem is on the list of the top 500 with john keats and walt whitman and sylvia plath...etc. its nothing indredible or even worthy of being on the list. its cliche and overly sentimental...its nothing that hasnt been written before by every angry lonely teenager.
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Bonnie Cote
(6/25/2008 12:34:00 PM) |
Some practical advice, if one is sitting alone in their room, waiting for someone else to come and knock at their door, they will probably be waiting a long time.
Want friends? Leave the room and go out and knock on other doors.
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Arron Westbrook
(4/25/2008 1:17:00 PM) |
not impressed; very simplistic, unstylish and cliched. The name says it all.
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