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Ronald Doku
(6/3/2009 12:12:00 PM) |
really good poem. what can i say, you were born to write. really good.
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Amy Fifita
(12/27/2008 8:43:00 PM) |
wow what a great poem. It's so full of emotion.
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Shannon Cobb
(11/17/2008 8:11:00 PM) |
Thats a song right?
Amazing. Honestly.
You can feel the emotion.
I might just print this one out.
And it takes alot for me to find the paper, and blah blah blah
So you know its got to be good; ]
Comment some of mine. I just joined today. =]
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Salu Salu
(11/10/2008 10:55:00 AM) |
man is born alone, life itself is challenging
you are the warrior to win ur world, it's different to all.........
I love accepting the life as it comes, so it's blessing....
in another sense I fight with relentlessly, for what I don't know
dear girl, life itself is fun................ it rolls on as the cycles destiny.
fine poem......
rgrds/salu
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Sweet Death
(11/6/2008 9:31:00 PM) |
I only have 1word 2describe this poem n its.......Fantastic
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Rishi Menon
(10/29/2008 7:34:00 PM) |
your poetry has the mystique of the mountains covered in dew.... beautiful on the outside, deep secrets within....one can imagine the hurt and suffering of those trapped by their own thoughts...a very deep poem. extreme. well done.
Ash(Rishi's Dad)
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Abby Rose Thorn
(10/18/2008 6:35:00 PM) |
I can totally relate! I've been trapped by thoughts and feelings of my own, and other things and idk if life ever gets better but it does turn around if you let it, but i can not say that you will not feel trapped at times.
Love your writings
can totally relate
lots of luv
Abby
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Alice Winters
(10/9/2008 7:57:00 PM) |
Emo girl u r truley amazing, i have never read a poem like your, it this is deff my favorite poem you wrote, i would love if you can read mine and give me some feed back
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