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(SEP 08 1988 / FANTACY WORLD)

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Buried alive

Inside that feeling of depression..........
It's not just a silly superstiotion...........
It's hard to make this confession........

I'm buried alive.................
I believe that no one can help me to survive.............................
I'm sick of this pathetic life...............
and i think it's all based on a horrible big lie..................

still there..laying there
inside that fearful place.....
where a feeling of death hung upon the air..........
oh god this's so unfair.............
my life has become an abhorrent endless nightmare................

inside that gloomy place..
where every thing is dark and..........
and the sun will never shine upon my pale face................
oh god how can i get rid of all these choking scares? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
how can i get out of this frightening place............

so hard to get rid of the weight of thise feeling laying inside my brittle poor heart...........
this feeling of depression it makes me fall apart..........

Submitted: Wednesday, May 23, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, March 01, 2011


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  • Merna Ibrahim (12/29/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    Indeed, a good description to a depressing feeling..10++
    Merna

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  • Pls.call.me.sux Unknown (12/29/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    GOOD WORK YEAH I MEAN... GREAT ;)

  • Ronald Doku (6/3/2009 12:12:00 PM)

    really good poem. what can i say, you were born to write. really good.

  • ~ br0k3n h3artz hurt l! k3 H3ll~ (4/24/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    this is a good poem you write real well

  • Amy Douglass (Fifita) (12/27/2008 8:43:00 PM)

    wow what a great poem. It's so full of emotion.

  • Salu Salu (11/10/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    man is born alone, life itself is challenging
    you are the warrior to win ur world, it's different to all.........
    I love accepting the life as it comes, so it's blessing....
    in another sense I fight with relentlessly, for what I don't know
    dear girl, life itself is fun................ it rolls on as the cycles destiny.
    fine poem......
    rgrds/salu

  • Rishi Menon (10/29/2008 7:34:00 PM)

    your poetry has the mystique of the mountains covered in dew.... beautiful on the outside, deep secrets within....one can imagine the hurt and suffering of those trapped by their own thoughts...a very deep poem. extreme. well done.

    Ash(Rishi's Dad)

  • Abby Sowers (10/18/2008 6:35:00 PM)

    I can totally relate! I've been trapped by thoughts and feelings of my own, and other things and idk if life ever gets better but it does turn around if you let it, but i can not say that you will not feel trapped at times.
    Love your writings
    can totally relate
    lots of luv
    Abby

  • Alice Winters (10/9/2008 7:57:00 PM)

    Emo girl u r truley amazing, i have never read a poem like your, it this is deff my favorite poem you wrote, i would love if you can read mine and give me some feed back

  • John Walls (10/9/2008 4:59:00 PM)

    Interesting. Lachrymose and lyrical.

    -J

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