Home Alone Poem by Seema Aarella

Home Alone

Rating: 2.5


The malicious wilderness is still
Like a dead body in icebox
Enfolding the life and the lifeless
In shrilling cold of a torturous morning

A sense of duty awakens the
Dozing mother bird, she leaves
Her nestling at once, her slender wings
Tearing the fog, like knife through solid cheese

Deadly cold teases the lone chick,
A cobra silently slithers towards its nest
Scared it squeaks' a dry whimper
A distress call no mother did hear.............ever! ! ! ! ! !

Friday, July 3, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: safety
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 03 July 2009

quite frightening but you have made a lovely poem well executed...10

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rago rago 03 July 2009

splendid colours........ you have given a nice touch..........

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Priyanka Bhowmick 03 July 2009

very well composed piece....

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Indira Renganathan 02 October 2009

You've succeeded...thrusting the reader in the frightening abyss...excited

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very frightening indeed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Jaleel Perinjanam 04 July 2009

'........no mother did hear.............ever! ! ! ! ! ! ' In a malicious torturous morning enfolding life and lifeless and Time: Still (standstill and at a halt) like a deadbody in icebox… Dear, you are taking us to another world..... Jaleel perinjanam

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Jaleel Perinjanam 04 July 2009

'........no mother did hear.............ever! ! ! ! ! ! ' In a malicious torturous morning enfolding life and lifeless and Time: Still (standstill and at a halt) like a deadbody in icebox… Dear, you are taking us to another world..... Jaleel perinjanam

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Rakesh Bedi 03 July 2009

A nice one, Seema, creating the feelings of fear!

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