A Strange Relation Poem by Seema Aarella
A Strange Relation
I burry the thought of writing,
Because I miserably fail to describe
This strange phenomenon
For I feel the pureness of the script
Is in the words virgin and unstated
Which I hope you will read in my eyes
When we meet during an auspicious communion
The loud vibrations of vocal chords
And roaring waterfall of speech
Irks the stream of subtle Feelings,
And I prefer not to speak
But convey more than thought and said
Through the soothing comfort of silence
Which I hope you will hear during my extended sighs
Do you know what eyes observe
And perceive does not belong to them
Why then pine for mere sights and scenes,
In the darkness of your secret dream
Won't I appear as an eternal moon?
Flaunting beauty and radiance
That will be savoured by you and you only!
It is strange the way we feel connected
We notice the earth, feel the rain
But can't touch or see the emanating whiff
I am not wrought of soil, you are no rain cloud
But our world is fragrant with nameless smells
About which we both contemplate
Identically In our individual solitudes!
Words can not write and speak the fragrance of silence and the language of eyes. A wordless moment of solitude is the focal point of this beautiful poem. Best Wishes Naseer
Do you know what eyes observe And perceive does not belong to them.... it is strange relation developing.... beautiful imagination.... good write.. healthy one...
a touching poem softly and beautifully penned..10+++.you can have a look on my poem silence which may be can talk to your silent eyes..The loud vibrations of vocal chords And roaring waterfall of speech Irks the stream of subtle Feelings, And I prefer not to speak But convey more than thought and said Through the soothing comfort of silence Which I hope you will hear during my extended sighs
a tremendous poem involving two persons, an abstract thought yet so very concrete when poeticised by such tangible imageries, teh state of mind which is elusive and in its elusiveness lies its beauty, the poet herself confessess that this is a 'strange phenomena', when this poem and THE JOURNEY are read together they throw a pattern into teh poet's present pattern of creativity which is missing in her earlier poem, plz carry on teh good work, thanx
Fragrance " we both contemplate Identically In our individual solitudes! " beautiful and innovative presentation. Nice one.
Its a fact that we have a very short journey of life. All that we see, feel and believe we own, is that really ours.. No... Thats the eternal truth...
It is strange the way we feel connected We notice the earth, feel the rain But can't touch or see the emanating whiff.....yes this connection everyone can feel and witness at one point or other.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I burry the thought of writing, Because I miserably fail to describe..... so true, so true cause I myself feel in this way most of the time....... another beautiful write from you Seema ji, a poem which can be felt through the eyes and occupies the heart, thanks for sharing many 10'sssss rgds asif