***days Of 'Fall'*** Poem by Seema Aarella

***days Of 'Fall'***

Rating: 2.8


Feeble sounds of timeless tunes
Flowing from across the dunes
Heard, unheard….in disbelief
I stood there…felt a strange relief

Morning mists and thickened air
Measured stride weighed by despair
Iced tears flow painfully in grief
Faith held…like winters last leaf!

Concealing smallest wishes within
Sporting untrue, bemused grin
Confused between heaven and hell
I silently watched as dreams fell

That winters night came too soon
Snow cloaked earth gazed the moon
Anticipating a warmer new day
I preferred to live, I chose to stay!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2008

good write...optimism holding out...the phrase 'winter's last leaf' is enjoyably noticeable...well done, Seema 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 September 2008

Faith held…like winters last leaf! - a wonderful line suggesting your poetical tongue.keep it up

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Amazing composition, lovely. Enjoyed and added 10.

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Koyel Mitra 16 September 2008

This is an excellent poem, mingling bare winter with shattered dreams.A 10.

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Raj Nandy 16 September 2008

Another sweet composition, bringing out your love of life! -Raj

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

Ammmazing composition seema! No waste of words and thoughtfull........10

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