Hollow Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Hollow

Rating: 4.3


You dropped by with
A short notice
When emotion was high
And to you I did miss

You did not stay as long
As I wished you to
When love was growing
With a new hue

You went away without
Leaving any clue
I woke up at dawn to find
You were not true

Tuesday, December 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 29 December 2016

A dream is but a dream, and can not last long.Still we love to cling to beautiful dreams.Without dreams life is meaningless.Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 January 2017

Thanks very much taking time to read and sweet comment. Much love.

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Seamus O Brian 21 December 2016

ahhh....those few satisfying dreams that leave us still longing for more. And yet, such is life. The beautiful and truly satisfying, always so fleeting. Reminding us that all of life leaves us longing for the deeper satisfactions of eternity. Very enjoyable read, Tiku. Thank you!

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 December 2016

I am very glad Sir for your beautiful comment. Thanks.

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Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

Nice wee twist at the end, clever little write. Annette

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 December 2016

Hi Annette... Thanks for support. Much love.

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Randhir Kaur 20 December 2016

Not true.. a dream.... Sad though... I loved it Sir...beautiful and simple..

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 December 2016

Thanks a lot for taking time to read and giving nice comment. I am glad you liked it.

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