Haiku- The Serpent Poem by Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet

Haiku- The Serpent

Rating: 3.8


When the serpent lied
He challenged gods right to rule
And thus lost his legs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2013

challenged God and lost leg. wonderful thought. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 May 2013

ha ha ha. Very nice. Excellent imagination. Go on.

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

A thought to ponder. Like this!

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Subodh Pandey 29 May 2013

beautifully thought upon....

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Michael Oliver 16 May 2013

like the thinking -

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Godfrey Morris 16 May 2013

good one there... i love it

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Marieta Maglas 15 May 2013

You're right, good haiku

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