Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points (20/04/1987)

(My beautiful flower)


You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
hand in hand
...in my hand
holding this precious gift
the blossom of your beauty
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my sweet soft petal
heart in heart
just one heart
beating to your sweet aroma
the aroma of your splendor
you are my beautiful flower

You are my flower
you are my first blossom
blossoming love
you are my love
you are my first and true
like sunset ocean blue
you are my beautiful flower
i am glad i picked you

Submitted: Tuesday, May 06, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, October 07, 2009

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  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .a lovely romantic piece, full of love and emotions.........
    I invite you to read my poem- - t.never look like one', , , , , , , , , , , plzz comment your views (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,611 Points Amitava Sur (1/12/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    A lovely romanticism in the poem expressing the love & likingness for the sweet heart.... loved it.
    You may read my poem My morning bud of rose (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,922 Points Ken E Hall (1/10/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    Beatiful emblem the flower for your love sweet dreams for you both...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (10/10/2013 4:26:00 AM)

    Romantic piece of poetry, beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anand Shankar (10/5/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Lovely theme Allen. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (8/15/2013 5:04:00 PM)

    Great poem! Please go to my poems and rate and comment on mine! Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 217 Points Manonton Dalan (6/20/2013 3:57:00 PM)

    i love the last two lines
    so beautiful for whom
    she should know. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Harriet James (6/16/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    Well once picked, it's up to us to care for it, a lovely poem on the flower :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,806 Points Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    Just like flowers love comes in many shape, sizes
    and colors. I am glad I picked you is a very good line.
    Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alexander Coppedge (6/12/2013 5:07:00 PM)

    This art illustrates your higher abilities. You struggled in the beginning of this piece but came up sharp at the end A great piece of artistry Go ahead and prove that love (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (5/25/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    how sweet the fragrance of the flower. the first bloom of spring. your last stanza, lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,138 Points Piyush Dey (5/24/2013 2:08:00 AM)

    A smooth beautiful poem..... :) ...thx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ellen Mendez (5/22/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    :) i smell the sweet smelling love in this poem.... :) as usual, its very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Claudia Krizay (5/21/2013 7:02:00 PM)

    This is beautiful- I love the ending- and reading it relaxed me. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Philip Emmanuel Penaflor (5/19/2013 2:45:00 AM)

    Simple but beautiful, and the sincere emotion can be felt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (5/18/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem indeed. Enjoyed the write. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwin Cordevilla (5/18/2013)

    it's like a song. inspired write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew David Dalby (5/17/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew David Dalby (5/17/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sukkum Chang (5/17/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    its a straight 10 from my side..beautifully expressed poem..keep inspiring us with ur poems.. (Report) Reply

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