Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points [(Motivational, love and humour poems)] (20/04/1987)

Comments about Allen Steble

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    great poem boy. nice image at your profile with your gf

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,178 Points Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Veteran Poet - 1,178 Points Richard Beevor (4/24/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, a feeling of great love

  • Rookie - 194 Points Anand Brown (4/16/2014 3:21:00 AM)

    Mr Steble, you write with such simplicity about the common experiences in life. Your work reminds of that of Sylvia Plath and Emily Dickinson. Simple poetry, written sublimely.

  • Rookie - 21 Points Raabia Tabassum (11/23/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Great poetry. Keep going. Mind checking mine out?

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (6/27/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    Mr Allen Steble is being now ranked as the most popular PH poet as per the rating of June 2013.
    He is a fine poet with a lot of insight into man`s life and his social disposition. Mr Allen, as he says, is a motivational poet with a vision for universal human love and even his humour poems have been written with a tell a tale purpose.
    Mr Allen`s diction is fair and simple without bombastic expressions and the multiplicity of his themes and universality of his philosophy of life have got the glitter of a rare blend. He is young and dynamic and can therefore deliver much more ahead.
    I wish Mr Allen many more innings over here and hope him to keep his going high.

  • Rookie - 134 Points Doug Blair (6/8/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    The Breeze Blows. Interesting that in the third verse, and observing limitless heavens in silence, the writer says that it is the last time of sensing the breeze. Is it that he dies, or that individuality is morphed into the great Cosmos. Everything is certainly much bigger than the writer, and he knows it.

  • Rookie Richardson Greg (5/31/2013 6:26:00 PM)

    I love fire and talk about it alot in my poetry. Try reading my poem, I am Fire. I think you will like it and it might give you a new perception of your own poem. :)

  • Rookie - 0 Points Frank (popeye) Pulver (5/14/2013 10:08:00 AM)

    this is a good poem that reminds that we all should never get up and keep the inner motivation and courage in our heart.

  • Rookie S R (6/27/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    hi,
    thanks for such a nice comment and for appreciating my poem.you are the 1st reader.by the way your poems are more than just a poem and is touching.honestly.thanks again.
    take care.
    S R.

Best Poem of Allen Steble

(there's A Fire Burning In My Eyes)

Even the impossible can be done
because i believe it can
the toughest challenge can be won
because i am a fighting man
...there's a fire burning in my eyes,
because i'm after the prize.

Anything far-fetched can be achieved
yes, it can be done
because in truth i believe
that i am the right one
but thats no surprize,
cause' there's a fire burning in my eyes.

Anything unlikely can be overcome
in an hour of darkness
even though there exists some
who think the situation is hopeless
but my spirit never dies,
because there's a fire burning...

Read the full of (there's A Fire Burning In My Eyes)

The Further You Go

Traveling through time waiting for the end
The end of what!
The end of the uneven road to the top
Fighting vigorously, The sweat of my face sparkles
sparkles with luminescence
sparkles with stars of proud spirit
Further in the distance, further i must go
Collapsing like a glacier under the scorching sun
Further, further yes i know

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