Haiku. Blind (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Blind (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0


Dark assaults the light
Clouds are sweeping past the sky
I can't see the stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 November 2014

A very well crafted haiku with insights......Valsa......great imagery

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 November 2014

your experience at night described in a wonderful way.......................this haiku is outstanding...........thanks

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 November 2014

A great haiku, beautifully crafted with vivid imagery...lovely!

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Heather Wilkins 28 November 2014

a lovely haiku on a dark night we can never see the stars

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Loke Kok Yee 02 November 2015

a lovely Haiku will blow it away thanks Valsa-10

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2015

If I face such a dark situation I start looking into the eyes of my friends whom I can see even in the dark and whereat I see at least two shining stars, one shining with love and the other shining with support. A lovely poem......10

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Queeny Gona 01 December 2014

Imagination is beautifully crafted in words dear mam!

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Queeny Gona 01 December 2014

Imagination is beautifully crafted in words dear mam!

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Md Asadullah 30 November 2014

Wonderful metaphorical poem, thanks for the share :)

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