Haiku. Autumn Sky (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Lot to imagine here. Great haiku. I too just posted Autumn (Acrostic) .

The autumn sky of an ideal strip of land is perceived here. But I am afraid the winter rugs of the sky may be very faint in many parts of India.

nice image with heaps of fluffy wool set to make winter rugs i like the thought

this's an excellent haiku Valsa, very pretty.

ooooh! i really want to wrap the woollen rug and cradle in the arms of autumn wind that may take me in a swish to some magical land like the flying carpet of alladin......so dreamy

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. A beautiful haiku on Autumn has been portrayed astutely.

In terms of my youth's activities and scenes.To love.

It makes me think of warmth and colours...Nicely written!

How a tiny Haiku can paint a characteristic picture of a season like autumn / winters, is evident here in this poem. Thanks.

Beautiful haiku. Autumn is preparing us for winter. Beautifully presented. Loved it.