Haiku. A City (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. A City (5-7-5)

Rating: 5.0


I see the busy streets
Strewn with scraps of human souls
Floating indolent

Tuesday, September 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: city
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 17 September 2014

Goes straight to heart.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 September 2014

very nice.short and sweet.

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Gajanan Mishra 17 September 2014

wonderful haiku.. like busy street itself.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 September 2014

A perfect haiku with insights.........Valsa............brilliantly crafted...........

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Dinesan Madathil 18 September 2014

Littered with human souls! The city here is the microcosm of the entire planet that is littered with life in its infinity............

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prah jay 30 April 2022

Thats not exactly haiku than it were a failed haiku

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Pallab Chaudhury 17 June 2020

A nice haiku... Well crafted one... It's a nice experience some of the gems in your treasury....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2019

A meaningful haiku so nicely delineated.Thanks for sharing.

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Wes Vogler 20 January 2016

littered/strewn would do it eg

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Wes Vogler 20 January 2016

whoops extra syllable L2 luv excellent poem

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