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Abdul Sattar

Rookie (13 May 1977 / Swabi)

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Frustration


When the soft mild eyes sore
The moment is pleasant no more
The heart strings does not play
The song of beauty is no more heard
The mood is feeling dejection
Headache begins to violate
The laws of peace and brain
The nerves feel sever pain
All is well but not well again
Thoughts are captured by dismay
Nights comes in the bright day
Day suffers with the night's gloom
And happiness vanishes from the screen
Then hold your pen and write
The story of your sorrows and fatigue
Converge your words on a paper
Like roses on a bunch hanging down
Feel yourself in nature's hands
Select colorers of your dream
And make a bunch of rosy words
To hide the thorns of frustration

Submitted: Tuesday, January 25, 2005
Edited: Monday, October 03, 2011

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  • Silver Star - 9,460 Points Soulful Heart (10/13/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    congrats deserves to be the poem for every individual.....inspirational....10/10......write ur pain and dissapointments colouring them with shades of ur dreams.....very useful trick... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,680 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (10/13/2014 3:16:00 AM)

    A great poem and wonderful ideas and messages through it. Irrespective of these frustrations and sore eye we will go forward, and make the world beautiful for a better tomorrow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lilac Wine (10/16/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    Thank you for pulling me out of the darkness and making life just that little bit more bearable...xxxxxx (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,299 Points Sandra Feldman (10/14/2012 5:02:00 PM)

    Roses are my favorite flower, Rosy words, perfect. Never thought of words as flowers but I love the idea.and the image, the thorns of frustration, great description of this psychological devastator.
    Excellent poem, sets life's mood and truth. Only Poetry can say so much with so few words.- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (10/13/2012 5:18:00 AM)

    A really nice piece, with much merit in the complex thoughts which engulf us sometimes, although obviously this specific track is from the writer..i found the changing rhyme ran comfortable with the subject in hand but was a bit difficult to read in points...tyvm and plz note this is just my impression...the last two lines are the perfect tie up...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michelle Freeman (10/17/2011 10:37:00 PM)

    and yet rosy words are not what you pen
    but raw truth of your emotions within
    to carve out the thorns you wish to hide

    frustration will not win this time
    even though it seems to loom so large
    above the head of your creative fount

    and yet you find your words rosy, a mask
    but i do not see this
    for i can feel with your pen
    the frustration you try to will away (Report) Reply

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